Waiting for Interview

Excited about hopefully getting an interview with http://www.indieauthorland.com/ !  I just have to pray that I filled out the questionnaire responses well enough.


Book Review!

Customer Review on Amazon from someone I do not know and have never met.  This is fantastic!
EPIC!!, March 28, 2013

“WHO IN THE WORLD doesn’t think this isn’t epic! I love how fast it reads. I spend a lot of time skipping through sections in books but NOT today. Not here. Not at all!

This book and story was so awesome that I gave it to my son to read and he does NOT read from a kindle. The fact that my 16 year old is reading a book without pictures (insert mom joke) is beyond words. That shows how FUN this story is.

It’s NOT like Harry Potter, but it’s just as wild of a ride. I’m telling you right now, you have to give this a try. Read the

free sample for an idea of the author’s splendid writing style. Sometimes you just have to ignore that a major editor didn’t go over a story with a fine tooth comb because now its the world of Indie Authors and those stories are priceless and worth any flaw in grammar. Not that you’ll find many here, but the story well made up for any minor flaw I found (I wasn’t looking for them).

I want to yell it to you, try this story. Its addictive!”

Here is the direct link to the review:Image


My first Author Interview- Thanks Red Hair Crow!!

Interview: Mark Brisby, Author of “Untoward”

markbAbout Mark Brisby:

“A self published author looking to expand my audience.  I am from Fairfax, Virginia and published my book through Amazon in January, and it’s called Untoward.  This book is the first of a forthcoming series (as yet unfinished).  The ISBN is 978-0615750118 and it is 488 pages long.

Description: Daumis always knew that turning thirteen was unlucky, but when he sees Denizens (evil magicians who kidnap children) he decides to stop them from abducting someone else.  When he stumbles into a botched rescue of Cewyn, the son of the local duke, he is also captured, starved, and tortured for his pluck.

Enter hero Tadrec, a graduate of a prestigious magical university, recently the only member of his party to survive a cursed artifact.  He is stoned on witchreed and morning his friends with absolutely nothing to do.  When he’s asked by the president of his alma mater to rescue Daumis and Cewyn because they’re the most powerful magicians to be born in a century, he agrees.  For a price.

Tadrec, Daumis, and Cewyn must encounter golems, insane monks, cannibals, giant badgers, an undead army, and a demigod all just before they can reach the magical, floating city of Horizon.  Not to mention the fact that they are in company that they do not necessarily like, trust, or can even stand in the form of a pompous Citizen who used to pick on Tadrec, an old, blind seer who likes to spit on people, a drunken minstrel, a homicidal metal shard, the sickeningly-perfect teacher and student combo, and a royal vizier who just doesn’t want to go bald.  With the forces of evil gaining ground from behind them, no matter what all the three of them go through, it always seems to Tadrec and the boys that their destination moves ever-farther away from them…In fact, it flies.



What genre(s) do you write? Why do you write the stories that you write?

I choose to write fantasy and science fiction genres.  I like my entertainments usually to have some sort of other-worldly aspect to it, so I find it’s easiest to write in those genres because I find them to be the most stimulating to my imagination as well as just plain fun.

When did you first realize you wanted to be a writer?

I was very young, in elementary school.  Probably the fifth or sixth grade.  I still have original works that I’d done, but looking at them now, I’m glad I’ve improved my vocabulary.

Who or what was your inspiration for writing?

I have always been creative.  In my youth I used to draw and I would try to emulate my favorite artist, M.C. Escher, but I hated the math involved with tessellations.  But reading books when I was young was probably the main reason. I’ve always wanted to inspire the same fears, loves, anguished, and well the rest of the range of human emotions in others.

What do you like to do when you’re not writing?

When I’m not writing I work at my full time job as an admin assistant.  In my free time I usually love to read and/or become lost in bookstores for hours, bowling, cooking, watching TV and movies, listening to a variety of music, and spending time with friends.

Where do you hang out online? Website URL, author groups, MySpace, Facebook, Twitter, blog, etc?

If I go online at all it’s usually to check the sites update:

FaceBook (http://www.facebook.com/mark.brisby.5)

Twitter (https://twitter.com/MarkBrisby13)

And my blog (https://markbrisby13.wordpress.com/)

What books are currently on your nightstand?

The Birth of Classical Europe (A History from Troy to Augustine) by Simon Price and Peter Thonemann and Conan the Barbarian (a collection of original, unabridged stories) by Robert E. Howard.

Do you remember the first novel you read?

The Lion, The Witch, and the Wardrobe by C.S. Lewis.

Who are your favorite authors and why?

Colleen McCoullough for her First Man in Rome Series, so thorough and sharp, steeped in details and tidbits of forgotten information. I envy her research skills.

Agatha Christie for her Hercule Poirot Mysteries, completely, captivatingly genius.

Your Writing Process

Do you listen to music or have another form of inspiration when you are writing? 

Music is a major component to my writing process.  Headphones in, iPod usually playing something that I like but is soft enough to fade into the background.  If it’s too loud or jarring, I end up concentrating on the music or lyrics and less and less on what I’m supposed to be doing (say, getting a character out of a sticky situation).

Most people envision an author’s life as being really glamorous. What’s the most unglamorous thing that you’ve done in the past week?

Scooped the cat boxes.  Yes, two of them.

How long does it take you to finish a book from start to submission?

I’ve never finished a project until now, usually losing faith in it/myself.  But this time I pushed through.  It took four years to write it and about two more for the editing process.

Do you prefer writing series books over non series or does it matter?

I actually prefer to write the books (and in general think of them) as a series.  I have big plans for each major character I’ve written for, and I plan on carrying those machination out.

Your Books

What is your novel about?

It is a fantasy novel in which two boys are kidnapped by evil magicians only to be rescued by someone they don’t necessarily trust or even like.  They must journey with this rival magician to the magical, floating city of Horizon where the boys will learn how to protect themselves from other evil magicians.  Basically the entire book covers the journey to safety through savage lands and must encounter cannibals, giant badgers, insane monks, an undead army, and a demigod.

Do deadlines help or hinder your muse?

I need deadlines or else I usually end up putting writing off for some mundane activity/vice.  A time table by which I have everything read is key to motivating me.

Do you outline your books or just start writing?

I just start writing.  I begin with one sentence and then see where it takes me.  If I ever do make an outline, it’s usually several chapters in when most of the characters have been established.  It’s mostly just so I can keep track of what’s coming up so I know how to transition between the two.

If your book is available in print, how does it feel to hold a book that has your name on the cover?

It feels like a life-fulfilling moment.  I was shaking with adrenaline so much that I almost dropped it.

Your Characters

Do you tend to base your characters on real people or are they totally from your imagination?

I tend to make up a persona for someone, but I might some comprise it of different pieces of people (either in my life or just that I’ve encountered).  I take the good and the bad and place them inside each character, because I want them to be likable and humanly fallible.

Is it hard coming up with names for your characters?

I’m a wiz when it comes to naming characters, pets, vehicles, inanimate objects.  Names just jump out at me, but sometimes it does take a mixture of several different choices until I’m happy with it.  Also, I feel the names should fit the characters, even if the character themselves do not feel their designations match.

Have any of your characters ever haunted your dreams or woken you up during the night demanding attention?

Yes, a particularly vain and arrogant magician taunted in me in my dreams, offering suggestions about how I could get him out of the mess I had thought up for him in the first place.

What in your opinion makes good chemistry between your leading characters?

Good chemistry is always nourished by conflict.  If characters start off hating each other, they will usually grow to like/love/respect them by the end of it…at least just a little.  The reverse can happen too of course.  Conflicts and arguments between the main characters not only let the readers become engaged in the debate so that they might also choose sides, but also makes for amusing dialog.

Is there a character from one of your books that resonates deeply with you?

The main four characters in Untoward have pieces of me and a few other people too.  Speaking for myself: Tadrec has my wit, Daumis has my interest in studying human interactions, Cewyn has my logic, and Rilliam has my scheming nature.

Random Questions

Name one website you visit every single day.


Where do you get your daily dose of news?

I usually get it from either CNN (because it’s on at work), FaceBook or from word of mouth.

The Names in “Untoward”

I chose present day names and then tweaked them to sound more unusual (some more so than others).  This should help any who would like to know how to pronounce the names.

Daumis = Thomas     Cewyn = Kevin      Tadrec = Patrick

Rilliam = William       Jedric = Frederick     Grevor = Trevor

Ranael = Daniel          Zall = Paul          Rikael = Michael

Vedrah = Deborah          Innes = Dennis          Grion = Brian

Dethry = Jeffrey          Viqlas = Nicholas          Xarles = Charles

SPECIAL CASES:      Orena = Lorena(L was added to the last name)

Xarie = Marie (doesn’t rhyme, sounds more like Zah-ree)

Gemaine = Morgaine (older-sounding name since she is hundreds of years old)

Saints and Eye Color in UNTOWARD

I used the basic western zodiac but made alterations to the names and birthstones (which became the color of the characters’ eyes).  Each Saint also has an animal associated with it.  All the water signs have sea life, all the air signs have birds, all the earth signs have predatory mammals, and all of the fire signs have mythological beasts.

I will list them in order of Saint/Eye Color/Animal for Reference:

First month of Spring: Itor/Garnet/Phoneix

Second month of Spring: Ghani/Emerald/Cougar

Third month of Spring: Qaxerine/Chalcedony/Eagle

First month of Summer: Randermyn/Amber/Seahorse

Second month of Summer: Dreymon/Tourmaline/Dragon

Third month of Summer: Xoren/Topaz/Lamb

FIrst month of Autumn: Saria/Citrine/Raven

Second month of Autumn: Paer/Carnelian/Shark

Third month of Autumn: Zevris/Amethyst/Unicorn

First month of Winter: Vehdrah/Peridot/Wolf

Second month of Winter: Viqlas/Sapphire/Owl

Third month of Winter: Wrien/Aquamarine/Whale